Hey guys, I've gotten poor feedback from three different buyer leads and clients that my managing broker and team leader looped me in on. Perhaps I'm being too aggressive?
Here was my initial email to one of the more promising buyer leads who wanted to see a specific listing she had already found herself after being looped in by my team leader (I forgot to copy my team on any of these emails by the way, for which I've already been reprimanded). My emails are in red, and the emails in green are the buyer client's. Names changed/redacted.
Hi Kate. My name is Rosie and I work with Charles. I would be happy to help you? What exactly are you looking for? Also what’s your phone number I can reach you so this way we can discuss further on the criteria you are looking for. What’s a good time to talk? Also, feel free to email me or call me at anytime
Hi Rosie, could I also see the property at 50 East 8th Street # 3U tomorrow after 5:30pm or Saturday between 10:30am-12pm? If there are any information about this property I should know, it would be great if you can let me know. If there are any Co-op rules, I would like to read them also. I am looking for flexible co-op that I can easily sublet after 1-2 years at the price range up to $400,000. This co-op seems to fit my need.
Hi Kate, I will find out more info for you. Lots of these co ops have rules on subletting that you have to live there for two years then you can rent for 2 years and then you have to live in it for another two years - so they can be strict. I’ll see what’s more flexible in other areas of the city, are you open to other areas as well??
Tomorrow is good for me after 5:30 pm for this one place. I’ll find out more info on it and get back to you on this one. What’s your phone number in case I need to reach you?
That’s why I am interested in this property. It’s unlimited subletting after 2 years. I am looking for that kind of flexibility. It also has to be parent purchase permitted for a child. It’s for my daughter who will be working in the city. I am interested in only midtown to downtown.
Hi Kate. Ok sounds good. I’ll see if I can gain access to place. There’s another co op for sale on 79th st upper east side for 670k? Have you been pre approved only for 400k? Just trying to see what your budget range is so this way I can send you others that could work for you? Are you looking for with how many bedrooms? Please send me your phone number so this way I can text you to confirm appointment.
I am interested in only up to $400k. I do not want to spend more than that for a studio.
Hi Kate, So this co op is not available for showings just yet. I will be getting confirmation as to when it will be available for showings. In the meantime, would you like for me to send you some listings of similar co ops in the area that could work for you and daughter?
Let me know,
As an update, this is what Kate emailed to my manager:
I don’t like judging people without meeting first, but I don’t like Rosa’s work style when I clearly stated my preferences. Is there anyone else?
What should I have done differently?
Here was my initial email to one of the more promising buyer leads who wanted to see a specific listing she had already found herself after being looped in by my team leader (I forgot to copy my team on any of these emails by the way, for which I've already been reprimanded). My emails are in red, and the emails in green are the buyer client's. Names changed/redacted.
Hi Kate. My name is Rosie and I work with Charles. I would be happy to help you? What exactly are you looking for? Also what’s your phone number I can reach you so this way we can discuss further on the criteria you are looking for. What’s a good time to talk? Also, feel free to email me or call me at anytime
Hi Rosie, could I also see the property at 50 East 8th Street # 3U tomorrow after 5:30pm or Saturday between 10:30am-12pm? If there are any information about this property I should know, it would be great if you can let me know. If there are any Co-op rules, I would like to read them also. I am looking for flexible co-op that I can easily sublet after 1-2 years at the price range up to $400,000. This co-op seems to fit my need.
Hi Kate, I will find out more info for you. Lots of these co ops have rules on subletting that you have to live there for two years then you can rent for 2 years and then you have to live in it for another two years - so they can be strict. I’ll see what’s more flexible in other areas of the city, are you open to other areas as well??
Tomorrow is good for me after 5:30 pm for this one place. I’ll find out more info on it and get back to you on this one. What’s your phone number in case I need to reach you?
That’s why I am interested in this property. It’s unlimited subletting after 2 years. I am looking for that kind of flexibility. It also has to be parent purchase permitted for a child. It’s for my daughter who will be working in the city. I am interested in only midtown to downtown.
Hi Kate. Ok sounds good. I’ll see if I can gain access to place. There’s another co op for sale on 79th st upper east side for 670k? Have you been pre approved only for 400k? Just trying to see what your budget range is so this way I can send you others that could work for you? Are you looking for with how many bedrooms? Please send me your phone number so this way I can text you to confirm appointment.
I am interested in only up to $400k. I do not want to spend more than that for a studio.
Hi Kate, So this co op is not available for showings just yet. I will be getting confirmation as to when it will be available for showings. In the meantime, would you like for me to send you some listings of similar co ops in the area that could work for you and daughter?
Let me know,
As an update, this is what Kate emailed to my manager:
I don’t like judging people without meeting first, but I don’t like Rosa’s work style when I clearly stated my preferences. Is there anyone else?
What should I have done differently?
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